Friday, June 20, 2008

 

minimalist haiku Friday

theme: heat

Mine:

Rising in waves
off the black pavement, shimmers
distorts all I see.

Now, you...

Comments:
You know it's hot when
the Brazos looks inviting.
Time for max A/C.
 
never had heat like
this in Detroit but I know
this is my new home
 
Weather is nice here
in Oregon. Could you Move?
Live with Tydwbleach?

Not hot, not cold but
gallons of rain each day. You
will get used to it.

Habib is here each
day. tiling away. Life's good.
Habib's a genius.

Most fun I have had
in 16 months. Though, watching
"Kinder Kempo" is great.

Fifteen four year
olds in little Karate
suits. Hilarious.

I know Karate
suits are called "GEEs" but how
to spell it? Dunno.
 
A woman of taste
Scans the scene, picks her target,
"Kiss me, Chicago!"
 
Cool this mother down.
Fans Pools sprinklers Popsicles
And the new Coldplay.
 
Your heat is our snow.
Miles uphill each way to school.
Either way it stinks.
 
Outside it's so hot
But the law school is freezing
Layering in June?
 
My moves are so smooth
Girls call me "Texas Hot Sauce"
Hotter'n Chicago!
 
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pink skies, air fights back
window units and rainbow
wind socks: longest day
 
The chill of winter
Has still not melted off me,
I was in PC.
 
Al Pacino with
Robert De Niro!!! Heat was
way to long, but sweet.
 
New Mexican food
Chiles in everything
Even the cookies!
 
Orange sun rising
Into the steamy morning
Open trail ahead
 
Back aches so badly
Had friend rub on some Ben Gay
Now I feel the heat.
 
Cayenne Pepper rocks,
Habaneros make me cry.
Mrs. CL's hot!
 
Mrs. CL's hot?
Toss her in the pool, CL!
She would still be hot.
 
Choose between fire ants
or 100-inch snow fall
Texas summer thoughts
 
ICU so cold
I wear fleece in June, shiver
Get in hot car, ahhhh!

Mrs. CL
 
Snow complaints in DC?
TradeLawGuy, toughen up, enjoy
Snow here is fleeting
 
Texas heat really
means energy lost on me
climbing stairs and such.
 
Summer heat is best
Enjoyed wreathed in sweat:
Mutual rapture.
 
If the first settlers
Had come to Waco in summer,
They'd kept moving.

RFDIII
 
I talk of return
To Texas the place I love
The heat gives me pause

On days like today
When it is eighty and dry
In Dupont Circle

Trade summer here for
summer there? Is it worth it?
Quality of life.
 
Yes, DC is good!
Salad bowl of influences
We get heat AND snow
 
fisher-price puff'lumps
soft squishy lumps of pure joy
i love puffalumps
 
Heat, the heart racing
All emotions magnified
Explosion of red

Where calm should be.
 
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