Friday, June 17, 2016

Haiku Friday: Swimming

Terrifying, soothing, a rite of summer; people are of different minds when it comes to swimming. So bring out your inner lifeguard, and let's haiku about it! Feel free to discuss any aspect of the swimming experience...

Here, I will go first:

The pool lays chilly
And covered in fish flies
Summer blonde cries: Go!

Now it is your turn! Just use the 5/7/5 syllable scheme, and have some fun!


14 comments:

  1. It looks so easy
    relaxing and athletic
    But boy am I slow.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Crystal Beach: shades on,
    tunes on, sippin' sumthin cold,
    cruisin' up and down

    All that water but
    no way will I swim; more fun
    to see and be seen

    Besides, the Gulf spits
    up tar balls, stainin' my suit;
    plus wet hair? AS IF!

    ReplyDelete
  3. Smooth, glass like, toe dips...
    Ripples spread, dive, stroke, mindful...
    In my own world, lost...

    ReplyDelete
  4. Arm reaches forward
    Catch, pull, finish; feet flutter
    I find my balance

    ReplyDelete
  5. swimming for fitness...
    It is great exercise, but
    when tired, you might drown.

    ReplyDelete
  6. My aching shoulder
    Forty eight years of swimming
    will do that to you

    ReplyDelete
  7. The Medievalist
    Swims like a rock in water,
    Sink, sank, sunk, the end.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Anonymous7:03 AM

    A foot, then calf, knee
    Delaying the icy blast
    Until: plunge, shock, swim

    ReplyDelete
  9. Anonymous7:05 AM

    Sun warms my shoulders
    Dappled light plays all around
    Peace with every stroke

    ReplyDelete
  10. Anonymous7:06 AM

    Municipal pool
    perfect water: clear, cool, clean
    Except those fish flies!

    ReplyDelete
  11. Oh stinky fish flies
    Drifting lifeless in the pool
    Where's the skimmer?

    ReplyDelete
  12. I stare at the clouds
    Water beneath me, weightless,
    Drifting with the tide.

    ReplyDelete
  13. Renée Jeanne Jacqueline Emerson4:41 PM

    Going down for the
    Third time,my mortality
    Swam before my eyes.

    In a college pool
    They threw me a long pole
    Forced to sink or swim.

    ReplyDelete
  14. Renée Jeanne Jacqueline Emerson7:45 PM

    It was amber like
    Beer,this irrigation ditch water.
    Floating green algae

    Bubbles,we swam like
    Slimy eels,but didn't worry
    About drowning. And

    Occasionally
    Left citrine liquid gifts when
    Time and nature called.

    ReplyDelete