Friday, July 19, 2013

Haiku Friday: In the Basement/Attic


Until I moved to Texas, I loved basements, those repositories of the true souls of a family.  There's such beauty in detritus, the things we can't bring ourselves to discard, but don't know quite what to do with.  

Then, in Texas, no one had a basement.  There, it was the attic that served this function.

So, pick your poison-- attic or basement.  I think you know where I am going here.  I will go first:

His best painting sits
Beneath some others, skates, wine,
Much lov'd silt of life.

Ok, now it is your turn-- it doesn't have to be about your basement, necessarily.  Have fun!  Make it more or less 5 syllables/7 syllables/5 syllables, and let it rip!

23 comments:

  1. Lovingly preserved,
    my dresses now must await
    her great-granddaughters.

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  2. Anonymous4:57 AM

    Mason jars, fruit-full
    Sit in a row by a window
    Filtering soft light.

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  3. Ghost in the basement,
    Big stones, cobwebs, dark corners,
    What is your story?

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  4. Sunshine Friday chores:
    Dust, vacuum, wash, water/or not?
    Sun beckoning was obeyed.

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  5. A dusty suitcase
    holds glimpses of a past journey
    Each item a memory

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  6. Campbell8:50 AM

    Never understood
    No basements in Texas with
    All those tornadoes

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  7. Anonymous9:41 AM

    Downsizing brings woe. Storage area too small for all
    Attic or basement held.

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  8. Downsizing brings woe. Storage area too small for all
    attic or basement held.

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  9. Campbell, it's the soil:
    clay, limestone ... rock-hard to dig!
    Always wanted one.

    Attics are stifling
    hot, and I don't like ladders.
    Lose-lose, in my mind.

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  10. Broken Rose10:21 AM

    Boogieman lives down there,
    Moldy laundry,empty boxes,
    Broken Christmas toys.

    Friendly foes long to
    Observe my frailty which lies
    Beneath this rubble.

    I stand in stairwell,
    Menacing Chinese Warrior
    Of Clay...guarding tomb.

    But do they know,it
    Is so very easy,to
    Lose your way here?...Snared.

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  11. Marguerite10:37 AM

    Pa,drunk already,
    Roared,"Get elderberry wine!"
    So,we took oil lamp

    Lit,down stairs,holding
    Hands. Only three and four.Sis
    Tripped.Lamp shattered,and

    We flew up the stairs.
    Scared and crying,we faced Pa.
    Put out fire still drunk.

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  12. Antonia Promessa10:46 AM

    My dead daughter lives
    In the attic.She shawls herself
    Silkpearl wedding dress.

    It was mine in 1982.
    She eats meringues of cobwebs,
    Drinks melted icicles.

    At least I know where
    She is and sometimes I come
    To see ephemeral,

    Her small body like a
    Moth,light on photographs
    Where she isn't.

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  13. Advent wreath, crib, self-
    portrait--all found in the new
    attic of our house

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  14. Geoffrey Mustang Boy12:54 PM

    Sal and I sat on
    The green fringed couch in cellar
    L'il bro crouched nearby.

    Key coital moment
    He ran screaming upstairs.Wow!
    Naked Sal ran too.

    It was the best of
    Times;it was the worst
    Of times.'Sixty-nine!

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  15. Mustang's Former Sally12:59 PM

    Listen Osler--Geoff sucks!

    Check out line eight,Dink!
    Two syllables too short,which
    Describes your parts well.

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  16. almost choked reading the "Mustang's".

    So many wonderful Haiku's this week.

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  17. Anonymous7:36 PM

    Me, too--
    Geoff and Sally are brilliant!


    Found in my basement:
    Mouse poop, feral cats, crickets
    No wonder I'm scared!

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  18. Cement gripped our brains
    Putty-fingered,bloatkittens,
    Runny-eyed,staggered

    Into gunny sacks
    Held by determined mother
    Who walked to weir-box. Plop.

    The boys lived down there.
    Depression held court,wore a
    Clammy cold crown.

    We lived there until
    Our house was built.In a body
    With out a head.We

    Malingered. Once the
    House was built,we moved up. Grew
    Tails.Salamanders.

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  19. 'Sitting the boys a
    Voice came maniacal from
    Night's Recesses below

    Laughing.The girls,,teens
    Looked at one another from
    Throat to tum, gizzards

    Leaping.Raced to boys'
    Room,huffing bureau block door,
    Out window to ditch

    On bellies to car
    Littlest drove to neighbor's.
    Turns out they had a

    Gunsight trained on our
    House.We saw dictionary
    On kitchen table!

    Much later bachelor
    Neighbor confessed. I can still
    Taste my flameanger.

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  20. Downstairs, sweet refuge.
    Big screen, pool table, bar, friends
    Best thing -- no parents.

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  21. Anonymous1:35 PM

    Basements aren't very useful in a tornado unless specially reinforced. We all had cellars/storm shelters. Used to store food, hide from storms. Had to check for rattlers, even tho we kept bull snakes in there to eat mice and rattlers, just like in the barn.

    We had a hired hand (briefly!) who proudly told my grandfather he'd killed all those g-d snakes in the barn. My grandfather and father had caught bull snakes and put them in there to keep the rattlers and mice down. I'm surprised that they just fired him! The barn cats did a good job with the mice, too.

    Lee

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  22. Merely an old chair,
    or a pair of golden bears,
    that no one cares for.

    A rug or a bug or
    or an old collection of tugs,
    that everyone cares for.

    Intentionally
    or unintentionally
    saved, they gather dust.

    Till she passes on.
    Then. They are taken away.
    To sell or to trash.




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  23. Good Gravy, David! That is wonderful! I really liked the unexpected rhymes and repetition of phrases...the word "merely" at the beginning,which is a clue. I want those golden bears...I want to hold them...but mostly I want the "Her".The "She..." which no one can own or ought to trash.

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